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Yatsufusa

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Where to begin...

First of all you should think about posting this in a pure video-portal rather than on Newgrounds.

The video was a bit laggy for me, you should really add a preloader if you insist sticking to the flash-format. Also the action was quite boring and rather short for that size. If this is advertising for a clan you shouldn't show so much 'everyday-routine' but rather awesome and amazing stuff you guys do. There was no information about what makes you special and not even a group-picture. Last but not least: There was no url, no contact info, no logo. Even if I WOULD BE interested in joining your clan, how would I make a first contact?

I started out expecting nothing too great and still got disappointed...

crude

On the tachnical side your characters are not really moving, most of the time they keep flickering from one location to another which lets them appear very unnatural. When they are crossing the bridge it really looks like it is: The characters are running on the spot while the background moves behind them with a tempo that doesn't match their steps. And try to remove the gap when the background repeats.
The bgm is mediocre and doesn't follow the action very well.
When the plot is 'over', the whole movie starts anew, over and over and over again... Maybe you should add an ending-screen.
Also the characters seem to have no good reason to be fighting in the first place.

Let me get this straight...

Let me get this straight...

-You filmed a low-quality 21-seconds movie on Youtube with an additional program, instead of just downloading the original movie. (Including a presentation of your inability to use hotkeys.)
-Then you saved the result as .swf.
-After that you re-uploaded it to... newgrounds...
-...and thought "so yeah." would give everybody an idea why you did that.
-Last but not least you used five exclamation marks in the title - for reasons also unknown.

Since you like quoting others' work so much, I'd like to take the opportunity to quote Terry Pratchett: "Five exclamation marks, the sure sign of an insane mind."

Now please consider adding information what you are doing and why you are doing it to your movie(s), because we can't tell...

animationandhelp responds:

well, it is my movie, go on the channel, and i will give you the link to this profile on newgrounds on the account. with the filming, i wanted to post this up, but it was .mov, and i could not convert it to .swf. so i downloaded this program to do how to vids, but it only filmed .swf. so i decided to record my animations, and put it up here.

fitting description...

Your description ("FAIL!") is indeed correct. Bravo.

I see...

This explains a lot. :)

The Movie itself could have used a little more movement in the middle but makes kind of up for it at "The End".

Nothing to see here. Move along.

When I pressed 'play' I expected only the best and the best I got! Really great movie.
You should ask Tom Fulp about a little medal, so all those medal-addicts (people like me) are 'forced' to watch it. Also the irony would be great. ;)

nice work

I don't agree with your opinion but I have to acknowledge your presentation is cool.

This is beautiful...

The backgroundmusic fits the animation very well and I really liked what you have done with the transition from a stickman to 'real world' people.
And one more thing: This would still be great even if it took you 2 weeks. ;)

I'm sorry you're sad...

Maybe you should talk to a friend? It will help a little.

"Genre: Drama"?

Dude, this is WAY too loud!

zuhane responds:

Thanks!

NG is 'still' nice, though some features merit improving.
Sadly, still don't have much time to play games.
Replies to your PMs may take a few days - keeping the quotation helps.

Links for artists below. ;)

(makes no difference)

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